This is a simple and very descriptive poem about love. I liked how you started every verse with "you are. I also liked thinking about the meanings behind each verse. My favorite was "you are the book on my shelf" I keep my favorite or most important books on my shelves in my room, the others are kicked out! Very good Allie!
hey hey heyy I really like this poem. It's super simple. 5 lines. But it's super sincere and beautiful. I love the line that says "you are the song in my ears" because it reminds me of when i was in love. everytime i heard a love song i thought of this person! very good(:
This is a simple and very descriptive poem about love. I liked how you started every verse with "you are. I also liked thinking about the meanings behind each verse. My favorite was "you are the book on my shelf" I keep my favorite or most important books on my shelves in my room, the others are kicked out! Very good Allie!
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of a chorus to a love song, It's good!!!
ReplyDeleteI like that you are always comparing them to something, "You are the sun in my sky." Great job!
ReplyDeletehey hey heyy
ReplyDeleteI really like this poem. It's super simple. 5 lines. But it's super sincere and beautiful. I love the line that says "you are the song in my ears" because it reminds me of when i was in love. everytime i heard a love song i thought of this person! very good(: